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作者: dammy 时间: 2002-5-2 13:12
标题: 偷偷看你
每一次你要来这里
都到窗前偷偷看你
等待着人群中,
你慢慢走来的身影

每次你要离开这里
都到窗前偷偷看你
目送着人群中
你逐渐远去的身影

喜欢你走来的每一步
看微风亲昵你的发丝
怕你嘲笑我的痴心
只好在窗前偷偷看你

舍不得你远去的每一步
看轻风依恋你的衣襟
怕你心疼我的孤寂
只好在窗前偷偷看你

好想一辈子就这样看你
春夏秋冬你来去的身影
头发白了才告诉你
在窗前曾经偷偷看你

作者: tweety 时间: 2002-5-2 13:30
hehe, who is that lucky guy?

作者: hjl2001 时间: 2002-5-2 15:39
看什么看，不好好学猫叫，还要来老鼠。

作者: saturdayafterno 时间: 2002-5-2 16:10
Hi dammy,

I like your poem. I have some experience somewhat as you. It happened between my roommate. There is a poem I wrote two months ago.

...............................................
I would like to hear your song, even if next to the door.
I would like to glimpse your back, even if reflected from the window.
I would like to remember your figure, even if ten days haven't meet you.
Am I crazy? Yes, I am fall in love with you.
...............................................

This is truly taken place on a lot of yesterday. But my friend move out now.
Story is over.

May 2, 2002

作者: baoan 时间: 2002-5-2 16:54
who is the lucky and handsome Mickey? We are eager to know the details. Maybe there is a wedding between Cat and Mouse in Montreal, the thousands-year opponents become friends.The natural law turns wrong under Dammy's emotion. Great emotion.

作者: dammy 时间: 2002-5-2 20:54
怎么冒出个老鼠来了?

作者: downtown 时间: 2002-5-2 21:26
原来猫是这么捉老鼠的。

作者: lzhou 时间: 2002-5-2 21:39
冒出个老鼠有什么奇怪?

好好的一首诗,要不是因为作者滑稽可笑(是个狐狸精),大概读了此诗的人都会有这样的感觉:那个少女不怀春?遗憾啊,DAMMY.你该换个笔名了.你已经不是写"大地溪"的DAMMY了.我要不看作者,感觉还挺好.一看作者,就和大伙一样:想乐!DAMMY的芳心还不是朝秦暮楚:早上往东瞅,晚上又往西瞧.只有傻哥哥才会上当.

作者: dammy 时间: 2002-5-2 22:09
拜托,LZHOU,我哪里得罪你啦,莫名其妙来了这么一大串.这是我几年前的旧作,今天无意中翻出来,POST 出来与大家共赏,不知道一顶顶"滑稽可笑""朝秦暮楚"的大帽子从何而出.我不喜欢在网上和人唇枪舌剑.既然有人不喜欢,老猫一死以谢天下.以后sinoquebec 的BBS上不再有DAMMY之人.各位就此别过.保重

作者: joymane 时间: 2002-5-2 22:23
dammy:
写的蛮好的，他们为什么说你，我搞不懂。
一个人的心境是不容易用几句话说清楚的，但你做到了。我觉得很好也很感动。

作者: lzhou 时间: 2002-5-2 23:11
唉,俺LZHOU本来就是四处碰壁,没有面子.今天又豁出去了,向DAMMY妹妹道歉:

每一次听说你要来这里发帖子
俺都从美梦里爬出来
躲在伸手不见五指的角落里
偷偷的LOG IN
在万网千贴中
等待着你敲出四个字:
闹着玩呢

作者: Matrix 时间: 2002-5-2 23:39
That poem reminds me of those little girls and the way they looked at me when I was in Middle school!
I'm telling the truth but I'd better stop here for fear of those jealous bboy, Mikie and peanut123 being mean to me. :mad:

作者: rosewiththorns 时间: 2002-5-3 00:27
大米：偷看后来有结果吗？你现在还在坚持吗？我也想学你，但怕坚持不下来。给我传授一下你的真经，我总是看几天就烦了

....没想到你要看到头发白了，我要是你干脆明儿就把头发染了！

作者: hjl2001 时间: 2002-5-4 12:30
Dammy的脾气不小哇，碰点不顺耳之言就要消失，别，网络上哪有那么多正经话，你不久前发过厨房有rat的贴子，所以我说让你学猫叫，忘了吗？
写的诗挺好的，继续。

作者: Matrix 时间: 2002-5-4 12:37
I can't stand to fly
I'm not that naive
I'm just out to find
The better part of me
I'm more than a bird...I'm more than a plane
More than some pretty face beside a train
It's not easy to be me

Wish that I could cry
Fall upon my knees
Find a way to lie
About a home I'll never see

It may sound absurd...but don't be nieve
Even Heroes have the right to bleed
I may be disturbed...but won't you concede
Even Heroes have the right to dream
It's not easy to be me

Up, up and away...away from me
It's all right...you can all sleep sound tonight
I'm not crazy...or anything...

I can't stand to fly
I'm not that naive
Men weren't meant to ride
With clouds between their knees

I'm only a man in a silly red sheet
Digging for kryptonite on this one way street
Only a man in a funny red sheet
Looking for special things inside of me

It's not easy to be me
:cool: ...

作者: gaaag 时间: 2002-5-4 17:30
送您一套《大腕》网络勾狼手册.欢迎先找我试试效果. :rolleyes:

> > 定得起最吸引人的名字
> > 　　跟着琼瑶小说学
> >
> > 　　上站就上男人最多的聊天室
> >
> > 　　直接悄悄话招呼
> >
> > 　　动作指令背的倍熟
> >
> > 　　什么//kiss、//love、//ai
> >
> > 　　能用全都给他用上
> >
> > 　　套出他信箱，再让他QQ加你，
> >
> > 　　QQ的头像要选好，
> >
> > 　　大眼睛，特纯情那种，
> >
> > 　　有事没事都要说，
> >
> > 　　你怎么才来呀，我自己好无聊呀。
> >
> > 　　还要叫加个亲嘴符号:*
> >
> > 　　倍儿煽情
> >
> > 　　时不常跟他二人世界
> >
> > 　　要用耳麦的聊天
> >
> > 　　一天光说‘我想你了’就得几十遍
> >
> > 　　再把照片发给他
> >
> > 　　光照片都让他流口水好几斤

> > 　　就是一个字靓
> >
> > 　　别人都是明星照，写真集
> >
> > 　　你要是弄个一寸免冠
> >
> > 　　你都不好意思跟人家说你有照片
> >
> > 　　你说这样的美女，一天能勾多少人
> >
> > 　　“我觉得怎么着也得三五十吧”
> >
> > 　　三五十，那时为你杀妻灭子的
> >
> > 　　150起，”
> >
> > 　　你还别嫌多，还不算说“你好”的
> >
> > 　　你就得研究上网的男人的心理
> >
> > 　　愿意上网找MM的主
> >
> > 　　要的就是找漂亮的
> >
> > 　　什么叫没事撑的你知道吗？
> >
> > 　　没事撑的就是同时找8个MM聊，
> >
> > 　　都是找最美的，不是找最爱的
> >
> > 　　所以，我们上网勾狼的口号就是
> >
> > 　　不求最爱，但求最美。。。

作者: dammy 时间: 2002-5-4 20:13
LZHOU,老猫回来啦.

作者: lzhou 时间: 2002-5-4 20:17
Are you coming back to fight with me? You are really a little girl. Sorry I get problem to enter chinese!

作者: dammy 时间: 2002-5-4 20:18
赫赫,不敢不敢

作者: lzhou 时间: 2002-5-4 20:26
Welcome to back. We all are waiting for your another poem. Actually I like your poem very much. It is really excellent!

作者: lzhou 时间: 2002-5-4 20:35
Of course, you also make me suprised! Little girl, don't bluff me anymore. I know you are greedy and beautiful cat. I owe you a delicious dinner. But you have to waite until I feel I didn't do anything wrong.

作者: lzhou 时间: 2002-5-5 08:42
也许是我过敏.我怎么觉得"轧是轧非"有点话里有话?千万别弄误会了.
实际上我并不认识DAMMY(自然也谈不上看来看去).只是大家都常在这里发帖子.觉得有点熟悉而已.她那首诗创作的很不错,表明DAMMY的文学功底确实不一般.只不过网上的一些玩笑,让LZHOU和大家一样可能对DAMMY有一个错误的映象.所以LZHOU也跟着大伙瞎起哄.结果把一首好端端的诗给变成了滑稽剧.对此,LZHOU再次表示歉意.

作者: wang8 时间: 2002-5-5 09:50
dammy, why not stepping out of the shadow and step into real life with that man? i have one hyphthesis, correct me if i was wrong.
you are afraid that man is not as good as you expected, so you'd rather just watching and watching. am i right?
the merciful wang8

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