Post by liujqw2006
Hi, Friends:
Thank you for your time in reading my messages. (This sentence is grammatically correct, but not a usual expression. Thank you for taking your time to read my messages, or thank you for your time to answer me.)
If I am wrong, please point it out. (please correct me if I am wrong. If you find mistakes in my messages, please point them out. Please point out if I am wrong) I am learning too. No one can say his or her English is perfect, I suppose. (not necessary, everyone knows it).
As a tutor of English (As an English tutor), I have to write conventional English, or formal, as some people call it; (Wordy. As an English tutor, I prefer formal writing. )otherwise my students would not get good grades in their exams. (logically this sentence is wrong. How ur writing style would affect students' exam grades? Readers would get confused. BTW, personally I think your writing sytle will only mislead your students and even lead to disastrous consequences on their writing performance. Take some esl writing courses ASAP!!)
Furthermore, every person has his or her own style in writing (writing style). In this aspect, I am rather convervative. I don't like English with too many colloguial expressions. (my opinion, you should learn colloguial expressions. they are very useful in speaking and writing.It's not a matter of writing style. It's about making your writings simple and clear on a forum.)
Finally, I don't know how to proofread what I write in this forum. I admit that sometimes I write in a rush. However, I will try my best to write carefully in the future. (you are not writing an argument. These transition words are unneccessary).
Once again, thank you very much.
Francis
Post by yk_ou
There are some more problems with your writing. I don't know how to fix them.... Hope other people can help you out.
Post by betterview
Hi YK_OU,
Pls try to be nice.
He only wants to make friends, not to show off his English.
If you want to make friends with him, just do it; if you don't, just go away.
Your written English is better than his, which doesn't justify your being rude.
Post by yk_ou
说出他英文里的错误，咋就不友好了？俺只是道出事实，并没有说他什么。他是教英文的，这样的水平去教别人，你看了不着急么？别人用英文写贴，不管有多烂，俺从来没废话过一句，知道山外有山，人外有人，没觉得自己配指点别人，这次实在是忍不住， 再说是他说PLEASE POINT IT OUT的。。。
Post by diorlancome
the guy is looking for friends, but people transform this corner into an english class. we chinese like judging?!
before correct others, take a second to correct yourself!
the english language skills are not so important to impress a person. the only thing which can impress is the personal touch of your language. we call this the soul of your language.
from his language, i find sincerity and honesty. and from others', i find only narrowness and arrogance.
Post by diorlancome
the guy is looking for friends, but people transform this corner into an english class. we chinese like judging?!
before correct others, take a second to correct yourself!
the english language skills are not so important to impress a person. the only thing which can impress is the personal touch of your language. we call this the soul of your language.
from his language, i find sincerity and honesty. and from others', i find only narrowness and arrogance.
Post by liujqwl2007
Hi, gracegao123:
The purpose of this thread is what exactly you described in your replies today. I am also interested in what you quoted, i.e., the opposite is love is not hate, but indifference. I never heard of it, but it seems to that it sounds good. I often hear people say that the opposite of love is hate. Your quote gives me a new idea about the relationship between love and indifference.
We may discuss more issues in life in the future.
Thank you very much.
Truly yours,
Francis
I will also cherish the similarity we share and respect the diversity.
I am not expecting my friends to accept my opinion completely, but I wish we can respect each other. it's said the opposite word to "love" is not "hate" but "indifference". I agree with this.
, like chatting. if you are not a boring,or ugly or very short person, welcom to contact me. Post by mckay
I desparately need stupid and uneducated friends; for they make me look good.
Post by liujqwl2007
Hi, Full Moon Garden:
I suppose that you wrote in response to my question "why Harry Potter is poplular?" After reading your message, I begin to understand. Thank you very much.
Francis
Post by liujqw2006
When you have trouble, can't fall asleep in the middle of the night, and want to talk to someone, I am your patient listener. Perhpas I will give my opinion on your issue.
Of course, in this case, it is better to communicate through email messages, NOT on the website. Confidentiality matters.
Truly yours,
Francis
Post by dw1987
but why the host always uuup his thread instead of open his mind and talk something? we can help!
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