Post by asun;2467607
且不问小伙build得如何,起码这英文还真像英文了。顶一个。
Post by iseayou;2467625
偶也顶一个。只是如果是SOULMATE是不是有性别要求?
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Post by iseayou;2467625
偶也顶一个。只是如果是SOULMATE是不是有性别要求?
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Post by iwonder1;2468015
Canada is a free country. Theoretically a soul mate does not have to be opposite gender. I wish everyone can find their soul mate. In my case, I am a guy and I am more interested in girls.
Post by Improve;2467906
还是有不少写作错误。
Post by J05;2468063
Actually China is a much 'free country' in this case. Why? Adultery is not a crime in China, while it is, under certain circumstances, a crime in Canada;)
Post by iwonder1;2467604
Hi, I am well educated professional in my late 30s. tall, fit, down to earth guy. like travel, music, sports, food, reading, home improvement, etc.
I am caring, warm hearted person and looking for a soul mate. family oriented. love healthy life style. If you are in your early 30s and care about the same and love kids and family, you are the one I am looking for.
I grew up in JiangZhe area. so if you happen to be from Jiang Zhe area, it will be preferable as we may share some common memories and topics. But this is not a must as chemistry always plays more important role in relationship.
If you are interested and wish know more about me, you can contact me on msn deuxvie@hotmail.com. I am looking forward to know more about you.
This is the first time I am making such post here. I wish the luck will be with me and thank you for taking your time to read my post.
Post by Improve;2468175
好吧,看在你谦虚的份上,就给你一个最简单的修正吧。
Hi, I am a well educated professional in my late 30s. tall, fit, down to earth guy. like travel, music, sports, food, reading, home improvement, etc.
I am caring and warm hearted person, looking for a soul mate. family oriented. loving healthy life style. If you are in your early 30s, care about the same, and love kids and family, you are the one I am looking for.
I grew up in the JiangZhe area. so if you happen to be from that/this area, you will be preferable as we may share some common memories and topics. But this is not a must as chemistry always plays a more important role in the relationship.
If you are interested and wish to know more about me, you can contact me on msn deuxvie@hotmail.com. I am also looking forward to knowing about you.
This is the first time I make such a post here. I wish the luck will be with me and thank you for taking your time to read my post.
Post by i am nobody;2481455
大部分地方改的都是对的,但个别地方改得有点矫枉过正。比方说,我认为: JiangZhe前面就不应该有定冠词the。再就是preferable 用it做形式主语似乎比用You做主语更好些。
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Post by Improve;2481459
他又不是在找它,如果去掉area, 就不应该有 the。
Post by i am nobody;2481651
三人行,必有我师。 你的“如果去掉area, 就不应该有 the” 似乎是正确的。阁下对语法掌握的精细程度令我佩服。但是 “他又不是在找它” 是什么意思,请指教。
另外这一句:I am caring and warm hearted person, looking for a soul mate. family oriented.loving healthy life style 似乎不太成句。首先caring 前面应该有个不定冠词a,另外warm hearted 这个写法正确吗?最后,family oriented.loving healthy life style 是修饰Soul Mate的并列短语,用句号隔开是错误的,而且两个并列短语结构不一致,读起来没有美感。
Post by iwonder1;2489082
谢谢 "Improve" 和 "i am nobody" 指教, 顶贴. 前一阵比较忙, 也没来得及回复. 春节快到了, 春天就不远了. 希望在这里发贴的朋友都能找到自己的心上人. 革命还未成功, 同志尚需努力.
Post by momokou;2489294
LZ应该找个母语是英语的人吧, 中国人不适合您好像.:cool:
Post by iwonder1;2468081
Hi Improve,
You know what? I am seriously thinking of your comments now as I got zero response from girls so far. If you can explain me why this is happening, this will be helpful. Maybe my english writing really is not so good.
Please help me .
Post by Crossroad;2490785
Your English is too good to sound like a nice guy,... just kidding
你想找中国MM对吗? 那末就好好些写中文, 要像写你的英文那么诚恳, 还有要好好写对女方的要求, 你的广告太敷衍了之
Post by momokou;2491756
对, 强烈要求LZ用中文说明一下对女方的要求......:eek:
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