oldwolf

楼主的英文还行。能用简单的英文单词来表达不太简单的意思。The article is well organized.

The main problem of your English is that it is still somewhat Chinglish.

随便替楼主改最后一段

     All I can say to you is, “that’s your body, you are the boss; it’s your life, do only what you feel comfortable doing! The rest is all lies!”


What I can say to you is "that’s your body, and you are the boss; it’s your life, do whatever you feel comfortable to do! All rest are lies!”

OLDOWLF