dragon99

高手们，这个是个病句吧？

How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are exchanged each day between the residens!

如何修改？

THANKS！:cool:

joeyfeld_

"How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are exchanged each day between the residens!"

是fragment，不完整的句子
主语是“greetings”
“that are exchanged each day between the residens（是residents吧）!“ 修饰”greetings"
所以该句没谓语，没宾语。

最简单的改法把“that”去掉。

dragon99

朋友,谢谢你的解答,;)

但是THAT 去掉后的主谓宾呢？

我认为是：
that引导的从句修饰greetings, 整个句子简化成：How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings ！但是我们发现简化后缺谓语，应该在greeting后加个are句子才完整.

但是如果重新把从句加上,整个句子变成"How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are exchanged each day between the residents are!" 这样是不是比较奇怪呢?
还是有更好的改法?

Post by joeyfeld_
"How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are exchanged each day between the residens!"

是fragment，不完整的句子
主语是“greetings”
“that are exchanged each day between the residens（是residents吧）!“ 修饰”greetings"
所以该句没谓语，没宾语。

最简单的改法把“that”去掉。

bguoz

How cold &unfriendly are ...。。。

joeyfeld_

How 引导的感叹句格式  how + 形容词 + 名词主语 + 谓语动词

比如 how big the apple is! （好像是这样的，中学里就学过吧，记不太清楚了）

Cold-eyed

Post by joeyfeld_
"How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are exchanged each day between the residens!"

是fragment，不完整的句子
主语是“greetings”
“that are exchanged each day between the residens（是residents吧）!“ 修饰”greetings"
所以该句没谓语，没宾语。

最简单的改法把“that”去掉。

满分 哈哈

dragon99

如果单纯去掉THAT，那么整个句子就变成：“How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings are exchanged each day between the residents!"
我认为整个句子依然缺少谓语，必须加上一个ARE，;) 大家如何理解呀？

Post by joeyfeld_
"How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are exchanged each day between the residens!"

是fragment，不完整的句子
主语是“greetings”
“that are exchanged each day between the residens（是residents吧）!“ 修饰”greetings"
所以该句没谓语，没宾语。

最简单的改法把“that”去掉。

dragon99

缺少谓语，宾语的句子在正式文本上是不会出现地！:p

海豚湾恋人

应该改为：How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are being

exchanged each day between the residents!

bguoz

should be:
How coldly and unfriendy the formal greetings are exchanged each day beteen the residents!
同意的举手

Post by joeyfeld_
"How cold and unfriendly the formal greetings that are exchanged each day between the residens!"

是fragment，不完整的句子
主语是“greetings”
“that are exchanged each day between the residens（是residents吧）!“ 修饰”greetings"
所以该句没谓语，没宾语。

最简单的改法把“that”去掉。