鱼腥草

午后，慵懒的阳光洒落地面，纵长的道路上，男孩骑车载着女孩.....
　　
「你会爱我多久？」
　　
女孩紧抱着男孩，侧着头在他耳边这样甜甜的问，她知道，这个问题没有100分的答案。
　　
带着娇嗔的轻笑，她说：「给你一个说甜言蜜语的机会。」
　　
男孩却认真的思考了起来。
　　
趁着红灯停止的机会，他举起手比了个"一"，要女孩猜猜他的答案是什麽。女孩想了一想，快乐的说：「一辈子！」
　　
男孩笑了，并不是因为她答对，而是感染了她的喜悦。
　　
绿灯了，男孩不仅趋车面对现实，也收敛起笑容，轻轻的告诉女孩：「我不会给这种答案的，这样的答案好到不真实了，像在说谎..再猜猜..」
　　
女孩对男孩的说法很满意，於是歪者头继续想..
　
「一天？」
「呵呵，我们已经相恋两个月了，一天、一星期、一个月这些都不成立喔！」
　
又是红灯，男孩握住女孩的手，微笑的看着她，女孩窃笑，大声的说「不会是一瞬间吧？」这个答案让男孩差点笑倒在马路上「当然不是啦！」
　　
他一直深爱着女孩的幽默，深爱着女孩爽朗的笑容，这个答案让他更紧握住女孩的手....
　　
「一年吗？」曾经有过一年时间等待的承诺，使得女孩对一年这个答案特别敏感。
　　
男孩摇摇头，他们之间已经不需要等待，只剩时间的考验.......
　　
「一百年好了，爱我一百年就够了。」
　　
女孩说着，并表现着幸福的模样。
　　
男孩说「一百年太短了吧，不够我爱你啊！」甜言蜜语是男孩的专长，爱听甜言蜜语却是女孩的弱点....
　　
女孩笑了，轻铃的笑声让男孩闯了红灯....
　　
「想要听答案了吗？」男孩想说了，
　　
而女孩想听「我会爱你多久呢？」男孩手比着一说：「一.......一直到你不再爱我的那一天.......」
　　
女孩怔了……
　　
一直到你不再爱我的那一天.....可长、可短，可以永远，也可以瞬间......
　　
而且，是一个绝对正确的答案.....

时空隧道

Post by 水云涧
hi time-tunnel,

i am sorry, i find that your english is not good enough to be competence for my teacher

with the same feel as yours, i taste that it is too difficult for me to understand your english message. anyway, i will show your english post to my english mather tongue friends. let them estimate your english sense and writing level

you make me laugh to the death, sweety ! honestly speaking, i will never have the courage to accept any students like you. that gonna kill me for sure.
anyway, you and some other guys here gave so much fun for my leisure time. really appreciate it !

时空隧道

Post by 水云涧
oh, my dear lanyi， thank you very much for your support . i desire to know you very much but i am timide to express my admiration.  i enjoy your super skill in editting the  image and the  music post in the forum.

anyway, i need their warm-hearted help to improve my poor english writing.

  i should correct the great mistake which space-time tunnel(时空水稻） had maken in his post.  i am 500 years old grandpa whereas like a baby- girl and i  learn english only 10 days. so even i write such a poor english message, i am still more smarter than his 70s senior mother.


now， i am looking forward to meeting lanyi, sofunny, carson, ghost-sad ,spring-wind & autumnal-rain and space-time tunnel.

hey sweetheart, you make me totally lost this time. i only get at most 15% of what you said, even it looks like pure chinlish this time.
you know what ? now i realize that one main reason your english level keeping at this stage is that you are even not smart enough to know who should be the right person to be your english teacher . but since somebody here already found one for you and seems yourself thinks that it's just the one you are expecting, so now i guess you and your teacher, you both, can improve your english together !
btw, don't forget to tell me how "great" those "mistakes" are !

时空隧道

Post by sofunny
In fact, I can understand what all the above IDs want to express, even there are still at least a number of 11 points as marked therein. These points could be wrong or unclear either in grammar or in logic, or both.

I may conclude that almost everyone (surely including myself) could often make errors no matter in life or in languages. But I really don't think it a big problem because these errors do not seriously affect something that must be avoided as in launching a satellite.




I agree with you only for the last part.

hehe, don't know where you got that software(or grammar book) to check those "errors". seems it's as reliable and good as your english ! you are so funny, definitely !

sofunny

In fact, I can understand what all the above IDs want to express, even there are still at least a number of 11 points as marked therein. These points could be wrong or unclear either in grammar or in logic, or both.

I may conclude that almost everyone (surely including myself) could often make errors no matter in life or in languages. But I really don't think it a big problem because these errors do not seriously affect something that must be avoided as in launching a satellite.

Post by 时空隧道
chun er, i can't agree with you more !
i know english is a big issue for most of the immigrants from mainland China. but i know, as long as you take (1) more effort on that and (2) have some sense, you (3) surely can make (4) great progress (5) finally. of couse, (6) the length of the term to make that progress depends on (6) different people and on how long (7) one has been in canada. but, sounds like this girl/boy has been living here for several years. my mother, a senior lady in her 70s without any english background, (8) just been here for several months and now (9) seems (10)her english is as good as (11) this girl/boy. i really don't know why.

I agree with you only for the last part.

Post by 春雨秋风
Several English posts from this ID were quite difficulty to understand. One has to do some guess work to know what they really mean.

Maybe this ID can send a draft post to FUNNY for correction before posting it here. FUNNY would be very glad to help, especially if you are a nice girl.

时空隧道

Post by 春雨秋风
Several English posts  from this ID were quite difficulty to understand. One has to do some guess work to know what they really mean.

Maybe this ID can send a draft post to FUNNY for correction before posting it here. FUNNY would be very glad to help, especially if you are a nice girl.

chun er, i can't agree with you more !
i know english is a big issue for most of the immigrants from mainland China. but i know, as long as you take more effort on that and have some sense, you surely can make great progress finally. of couse, the length of the term to make that progress depends on different people and on how long one has been in canada. but, sounds like this girl/boy has been living here for several years. my mother, a senior lady in her 70s without any english background, just been here for several months and now seems her english is as good as this girl/boy. i really don't know why.

春雨秋风

Several English posts  from this ID were quite difficulty to understand. One has to do some guess work to know what they really mean.

Maybe this ID can send a draft post to FUNNY for correction before posting it here. FUNNY would be very glad to help, especially if you are a nice girl.

Post by 水云涧
sure, i desire to meet you!:eek!: desire to meet space-time, desire to meet carson and ghost-sad. it is my superme  adream and curious  thing:eek:

thanks for correcting my errors.:cool:

i am looking forward to meet sofunny,space-time tunnel, carson and ghost-sad. :cool:
i wish  you could give me the honour.:rolleyes::cool:

sofunny

HI, I think it might be changed to the following expression:

In addition (moreover), I am looking forward to meeting .... sofunny?  Ah? it's me. Why are you so interested in meeting with me? Do you really think I am so funny? :rolleyes:

Post by 水云涧


in addition, i am looking forward meeting carson,sofunny, ghost and one you will accompany with.:cool:

时空隧道

Post by 水云涧
I ADMIRE YOU from my bottom heart!

咳，不解释就算了。虽然我现在处于凑帖阶段，但也要尽量保证跟帖质量，不然对不起sinoquebec几年来的滋润。好吧，从此我的bottom line设定为跟你的帖。