[联谊] looking for girl friend for stable life

冬青 · 发表于 2003-2-9 17:58

What a Human Being! Your English is not even as good as Blue@maple's, but you were trying to give him advices. I think Blue@maple expressed his thoughts clearly, much better than that Human Being.

Human Being · 发表于 2003-2-9 20:49

Dongqing,
Really ? I am afraid I come to be a bit picky this time. Watch your poster, two grammar errors as follows:
1. Advice, not "advices".
2. That of yours, not "that human being".
Am i right ? You must have failed your TOEFL many times before if you have had chances to do so. This time I offer you free. Next time you won't be that lucky.

Human Being · 发表于 2003-2-9 20:51

Also, not "you were ...", should be "you are".

Princess · 发表于 2003-2-9 21:22

树叶大哥要找老婆，你们在这吵什么？
树叶大哥，你应该去上大学中去学，老师会系统教你语法和写做，你工作也要写啊！时态和语法很重要，英语是要用它表达的！
一个句子要完整！你是要用英语思考的，不能这样翻译！
另外，你不介意一液情，你会被无聊女人利用，正经女人又会另有相法！你人是很友善，只是为啥有时不如我小孩明白事务？

冬青 · 发表于 2003-2-10 08:57

Human Being,
Your pickiness is welcome if you are an English teacher. But you look stupid to find fault with others here. The function of a language is to convey one's thoughts. Most Chinese even make a mistake when they speak Chinese; native English-speaking people also don't care some grammatic errors.
BTW, I had only one chance to take TOEFL after one month's preparation. The score is 263(24/27/28).It is not good, but enough for me to apply for PhD program.

Human Being · 发表于 2003-2-10 18:19

Mr. Dong Qing ---

Wrong ! In a large sense, the articulation of one's language represents his personal quality. How can you convey what you mean by keeping making errors ? I am pleased to see you have improved your writing compared with your last one. Your gain through this argument ? You thought I was picking Maple's English ? You must have a stunt problem if so.
One more correction for you this time any way. Not "you look stupid", should be "you sound stupid".
Btw, what do you mean by PhD ? Unfortunately in most of the cases, the reality is you would be still regarded as somebody being without a decent education if you keep throwing out erroneous expressions.
If going forward with this debate reminds you of watching your writing, I will be gald to head for. Otherwise, I better get stepping out.

blue@maple · 发表于 2003-2-15 12:03

一年一度的情人节静悄悄地过去了，窗外还是那雪，阳光却很灿烂，裸着身子的我很温暖，却仍然可以感觉外面阳光下的寒冷，天很蓝，蓝得让你心动，赤条条的树枝，一动也不动，你可以感觉那份寂静，静的倘然，虽然，没有人可以相拥着体会这份周末的恬然，可自己竟也安然地任凭思绪零零散散，现实有时就象这窗外，很美，美的让你冲动，可我也不得不提醒自己蒙特利尔冬日的阳光容不得你裸身沐浴。。。我真的期望夏天的来临了。可是，没有爱的夏日，又能怎样？
期盼而已。

噢，对了，princess,你为什么叫我树叶，我名字里可没有叶子啊，如果只是树叶就简单了，栖在枝上沐着阳光也好，斑斓如火随风飘落也好，潇洒无忧，叶落归根。

human being 和冬青，你们的英语都很棒，真希望有机会和你们聊聊，毕竟语言是交流的工具，不是书，书有时是搁在架上的，除去交谈的用处，语言就少了大半的功用了，HUMAN BEING，你同意吗？即便我的英文不好，我还是有勇气用英语和你们交流，即使面对面。

yan-yan · 发表于 2003-2-16 15:34

To blue@Maple:

Have you found a lover now?

What kind of girl would you like? Is only honest you request?

would you mind say something about yourself?

I'll be very glad to contact with you if you were as honest as you
request the others.

outlaws · 发表于 2003-2-16 18:02

guys, we r not supposed to be piggy of bluemaple's english^^. i belve he has a quite gd temper, and really nice... i do wish u could find the one u want... i came here accidentally... what made me start to type was the attitude u have for ur lover, plus... i just wanna let u know, usully i don't think it's a good way to find a lover though internet... although we r in same city, it's too unrealistic... people r so artificial here, incredibly irresponsible... just wait, don't push urself, prepare urself to be the best u could be... ur sweety will show up eventually.
believe that and good luck! :cool:

Princess · 发表于 2003-2-18 18:15

树大哥，你找到老婆没有？孤单的情人节不好过啊！你写了好多什么话？我有好多读不懂！
树大哥是个不错的人，勇于承认现实，也未见他出口恶语！中国人这样的不多！