To OPEL,
Agree with your insight on his originality.
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我倒,就这种写作水平也号称"well known for my writing skills"
兄台,give me a break!!!
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As per my Toronto ESL teacher, he would rephrase some expressions in that letter.
one and a half years - one year and a half;
my experience..., and I have... - structure prob.
I have..., but I have... - structure prob.
I was always..., although - tense, struct prob.
... plus many wording and punctuation errors.
However, honestly his English is good enough as a second language. I believe his English proficiency is for sure above the average of us Chinese new immigrants in Montreal. wink |