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Please don't make yourself more like a loser than the poor guy!
倒时差,睡不着,来凑凑热闹。
(1) "If you were get marriage...": "marriage" is a noun. It is better to express either "If you got married..." or "If you were married..."
(2) "... the second time": do you mean "again"? If you prefer using "chinglish", then, why don't you just write it directly in chinese? At least, using correct chinese will not make you seem so ridiculous here.
(3) "... the most nice man": the superlative degree of "nice" is "nicest".
(4) "... on the world": we live "in the world".
(5) "... any argue would not happened again": this may be the most obvious mistake here. "Happen" is a verb. Please use its infinitive after "would".
(6) "argue" usually is used as a verb, and its noun form is "argument". In addition, "argument" can also be used as a countable noun. "... no more arguments would happen again" will probably help you to make sense.
(7) punctuation mistake: we use a comma (,) rather than a full stop (.) between two clauses.
如果您不会或者不能用中文打字,那么请至少使用稍微像样一些的外语来表达您的看法。
There are SEVEN mistakes in such a short sentence - it is not blatant after all. By the way, do you make yourself more like a "loser" by raping English in this way?
Anyway, rational opinions are much more convincing than just being judgmental.
Post by wanglu2004
If you were get marriage the second time, please try to be the most nice man to your wife on the world. I believe any argue would not happened again. |
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