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发表于 2006-3-5 02:30 | 只看该作者
a "woman" using lousy english?


Post by sinoquebec2003
Sounds like a woman.
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发表于 2006-3-5 02:32 | 只看该作者

Please don't make yourself more like a loser than the poor guy!

倒时差,睡不着,来凑凑热闹。

(1) "If you were get marriage...": "marriage" is a noun. It is better to express either "If you got married..." or "If you were married..."

(2) "... the second time": do you mean "again"? If you prefer using "chinglish", then, why don't you just write it directly in chinese? At least, using correct chinese will not make you seem so ridiculous here.

(3) "... the most nice man": the superlative degree of "nice" is "nicest".

(4) "... on the world": we live "in the world".

(5) "... any argue would not happened again": this may be the most obvious mistake here. "Happen" is a verb. Please use its infinitive after "would".

(6) "argue" usually is used as a verb, and its noun form is "argument". In addition, "argument" can also be used as a countable noun. "... no more arguments would happen again" will probably help you to make sense.

(7) punctuation mistake: we use a comma (,) rather than a full stop (.) between two clauses.

如果您不会或者不能用中文打字,那么请至少使用稍微像样一些的外语来表达您的看法。
There are SEVEN mistakes in such a short sentence - it is not blatant after all. By the way, do you make yourself more like a "loser" by raping English in this way?


Anyway, rational opinions are much more convincing than just being judgmental.
Post by wanglu2004
If you were get marriage the second time, please try to be the most nice man to your wife on the world. I believe any argue would not happened again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-3-13 18:32 | 只看该作者

感谢!

  看了各位的建议,颇受启发,相信生活会逐渐走上正轨的。对各位的关心深表谢意!
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发表于 2006-3-14 12:49 | 只看该作者
离了就离了呗, 旧的不去新的怎么来呀!!
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发表于 2006-3-14 20:43 | 只看该作者

兄弟别灰心,香车美女咱都有,先发给你个乐乐!

兄弟别灰心,香车美女咱都有,先发给你个乐乐!哈哈........

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发表于 2006-3-15 16:50 | 只看该作者
放弃一段并不幸福的感情,再去寻找一段幸福的感情,这不是挺好的吗?:p
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发表于 2006-3-15 18:40 | 只看该作者
哥们,旧的不去,新的不来。
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发表于 2006-3-15 19:29 | 只看该作者

you are a English techer?

Post by pingfanren
  
Anyway, rational opinions are much more convincing than just being judgmental.


are you teach English in China? your English is pretty good.
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发表于 2006-3-15 20:12 | 只看该作者

how can i do?

不知道是应该祝贺你离婚呢,还是应该为你感到惋惜。我想还是前者吧。两人离婚一定是到了必须走到这一步了,这是最好的选择了。或许分开后两人能更好的反思一下,给对方一定的时间和空间,如果两人能再续前缘,会更懂得珍惜;如果感情不再继续,每个人也会有新的开始。人生苦短,没有什么时间想离婚是对是错,继续走下去,即使独自一人。
想问一下,两人都是移民,未入加籍,离婚手续如何办理?希望给予答复。EMAIL: yyll2004@yahoo.com.cn
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发表于 2006-3-17 19:50 | 只看该作者

一家之言

哈哈,多谢你的夸奖!以前连汉语都没有教过,更别说英语了。偶尔看到这个论坛上那两句错误百出的句子,实在不忍心,憋不住多了嘴。我不了解这个网站,但从名字看应该是中国人为所有讲华语的人办的,我猜99%以上的读者都是受过正统中文教育的人,那么大家还是认真地说中国话比较好。
我知道加拿大是以英语和法语为官方语言的。但是在这里和同胞讲自己的看法,还是说中文比较亲切一些。如果要练习外语的话,在这个双语国度里,有得是专业的去处。我们还不如好好珍惜这片中文的天地吧。
btw, maybe this is a typo in your title: "you are a English techer?" --> " are you AN English teacher?"

祝你周末愉快!
Post by amelie_xq
are you teach English in China? your English is pretty good.
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