偷偷看你

dammy · 发表于 2002-5-2 13:12

每一次你要来这里
都到窗前偷偷看你
等待着人群中,
你慢慢走来的身影

每次你要离开这里
都到窗前偷偷看你
目送着人群中
你逐渐远去的身影

喜欢你走来的每一步
看微风亲昵你的发丝
怕你嘲笑我的痴心
只好在窗前偷偷看你

舍不得你远去的每一步
看轻风依恋你的衣襟
怕你心疼我的孤寂
只好在窗前偷偷看你

好想一辈子就这样看你
春夏秋冬你来去的身影
头发白了才告诉你
在窗前曾经偷偷看你

tweety · 发表于 2002-5-2 13:30

hehe, who is that lucky guy?

hjl2001 · 发表于 2002-5-2 15:39

看什么看，不好好学猫叫，还要来老鼠。

saturdayafterno · 发表于 2002-5-2 16:10

Hi dammy,

I like your poem. I have some experience somewhat as you. It happened between my roommate. There is a poem I wrote two months ago.

...............................................
I would like to hear your song, even if next to the door.
I would like to glimpse your back, even if reflected from the window.
I would like to remember your figure, even if ten days haven't meet you.
Am I crazy? Yes, I am fall in love with you.
...............................................

This is truly taken place on a lot of yesterday. But my friend move out now.
Story is over.

May 2, 2002

baoan · 发表于 2002-5-2 16:54

who is the lucky and handsome Mickey? We are eager to know the details. Maybe there is a wedding between Cat and Mouse in Montreal, the thousands-year opponents become friends.The natural law turns wrong under Dammy's emotion. Great emotion.

dammy · 发表于 2002-5-2 20:54

怎么冒出个老鼠来了?

downtown · 发表于 2002-5-2 21:26

原来猫是这么捉老鼠的。

lzhou · 发表于 2002-5-2 21:39

冒出个老鼠有什么奇怪?

好好的一首诗,要不是因为作者滑稽可笑(是个狐狸精),大概读了此诗的人都会有这样的感觉:那个少女不怀春?遗憾啊,DAMMY.你该换个笔名了.你已经不是写"大地溪"的DAMMY了.我要不看作者,感觉还挺好.一看作者,就和大伙一样:想乐!DAMMY的芳心还不是朝秦暮楚:早上往东瞅,晚上又往西瞧.只有傻哥哥才会上当.

dammy · 发表于 2002-5-2 22:09

拜托,LZHOU,我哪里得罪你啦,莫名其妙来了这么一大串.这是我几年前的旧作,今天无意中翻出来,POST 出来与大家共赏,不知道一顶顶"滑稽可笑""朝秦暮楚"的大帽子从何而出.我不喜欢在网上和人唇枪舌剑.既然有人不喜欢,老猫一死以谢天下.以后sinoquebec 的BBS上不再有DAMMY之人.各位就此别过.保重

joymane · 发表于 2002-5-2 22:23

dammy:
写的蛮好的，他们为什么说你，我搞不懂。
一个人的心境是不容易用几句话说清楚的，但你做到了。我觉得很好也很感动。