liujqw2006

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samlfu

I was taking a cost accounting course 3 or 4 yrs ago in Concordia and there was a classmate who had the similar background you described in previous posts. I browse this website occasinally and happened to read your post. It's your name that reminded me of that classmate.

liujqw2006

Hi, Samlfu:

Thank you for writing the message. It is not important whether I am the person you met or not. The important thing is that we may share some viewpoints in life now and in the future.

I wish that you live a happy life. Speaking happiness, I don't know your own definition. Different people have different definitions about happiness. In fact, it is an interesting topic.

Wishing to talk to you again,

Francis

yk_ou

It's hard for me to tell  the truth, but ur english really sucks...Please proofread ur messages before you post them. There are too many mistakes including "I was graduated..."

westgogo

It's hard for me to tell the truth, but ur english really sucks...Please proofread ur messages before you post them. There are too many mistakes including "I was graduated...
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About the human characters and behaviour. interesting topic.

liujqw2006

Hi, Friends:

Thank you for your time in reading my messages.

If I am wrong, please point it out. I am learning too. No one can say his or her English is perfect, I suppose.

As a tutor of English, I have to write conventional English, or formal, as some people call it; otherwise my students would not get good grades in their exams.

Furthermore, every person has his or her own style in writing. In this aspect, I am rather convervative. I don't like English with too many colloguial expressions.

Finally, I don't know how to proofread what I write in this forum. I admit that sometimes I write in a rush. However, I will try my best to write carefully in the future.

Once again, thank you very much.

Francis

samlfu

Hi Francis,

It seems that you are looking for an Eng study partner more than a friend. In terms of making friends, I perfer ones with who I can talk in my first language which is definitely not Eng. I dont feel like to  express myself in Eng, especially in particular cases only sharing between friends. If for study purpose, it's another story.

BTW, thanks for your kindly wish, and the same to you!

liujqw2006

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yk_ou

Post by liujqw2006
Hi, Friends:



Thank you for your time in reading my messages. (This sentence is grammatically correct, but not a usual expression. Thank you for taking your time to read my messages, or thank you for your time to answer me.)

If I am wrong, please point it out. (please correct me if I am wrong. If you find mistakes in my messages, please point them out. Please point out if I am wrong)  I am learning too. No one can say his or her English is perfect, I suppose. (not necessary, everyone knows  it).

As a tutor of English (As an English tutor), I have to write conventional English, or formal, as some people call it; (Wordy. As an English tutor, I prefer formal writing. )otherwise my students would not get good grades in their exams. (logically this sentence is wrong. How ur writing style would affect students' exam grades? Readers would get confused. BTW, personally I think your writing sytle will only mislead your students and even lead to disastrous consequences on their writing performance. Take some esl writing courses ASAP!!)

Furthermore, every person has his or her own style in writing (writing style). In this aspect, I am rather convervative. I don't like English with too many colloguial expressions. (my opinion, you should learn colloguial expressions. they are very useful in speaking and writing.It's not a matter of writing style. It's about making your writings simple and clear on a forum.)

Finally, I don't know how to proofread what I write in this forum. I admit that sometimes I write in a rush. However, I will try my best to write carefully in the future. (you are not writing an argument. These transition words are unneccessary).

Once again, thank you very much.



Francis

There are some more problems with your writing. I don't know how to fix them.... Hope other people can help you out.

samlfu

Post by yk_ou
There are some more problems with your writing. I don't know how to fix them.... Hope other people can help you out.

Good points! You make it clearly.

And Suns just tied Spurs at 2:2! what an exciting game! Good points, 2!