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LZ英文不错,但还有瑕疵
随便摘录一段如下
Everyone has their own beliefs, which make humans unique. There is no right or wrong or good or bad. My beliefs make me as “me”, make my “Sherryness”!
So don’t look all around to see what others doing or saying, put your head down, focus on yourself, you will hear what your heart says!
第一句:everyone has their beliefs中的their 应改成his/her,因为everyone是单数.
第二段don’t look all around to see what others doing or saying一句中, doing 和saying应该改成:do 和say
但是,总体来说,瑕不掩瑜,老外英文未必这么流利. |
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