[作品展示] 【不断更新】初学者上图，高手们不要吝啬哇，多给点意见【不断更新】

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-26 14:10

Post by kkli;2344202
1 2 4 5 composition is not very comfortable for my eyes

Portraits, light is harsh and plain, no matter what flash you are using, you have to turn down at least one stop. Poses are awkward too, 6 7 you had focus problem. 9 is interesting, better than others.

street photos, don't know why you shot them. I don't prefer to see girls like someone up there. LOL

ballons: 15 are good, color and composition. 16, don't know why you cut the fish head, but like the color and find ok to sharpen like what you did, or my old monitor has problem.

thanks your suggestion

16不是我要cut，我的图是1024宽的，超出论坛宽度的地方论坛显示不了。原图见这里
http://gallery.i4wei.com/content ... alloon/IMG_1150.jpg

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-26 14:18

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-26 14:21

kkli · 发表于 2009-8-26 14:35

pls resize the photos before you attach them here.

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-26 14:48

Post by kkli;2344379
pls resize the photos before you attach them here.

我没有attach，直接连过来的。
看来下次要注意了，尽量只放竖片，横片得resize后attach。

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-26 14:50

少数派 · 发表于 2009-8-26 15:00

Post by kkli;2344272
can't type chinese at work. if you really want, i can translate myself tonight.

朋友，用这个打中文比重新翻译简单多了！

http://www.chinese-tools.com/tools/ime.html

kkli · 发表于 2009-8-26 15:09

DOESN'T WORK, WE BLOCKED ALL POPUPS AND PLUG-INS.

AND SPACE BETWEEN EACH LETTER, HARDER THAN ENGLISH. :p

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-26 15:23

Post by kkli;2344412
DOESN'T WORK, WE BLOCKED ALL POPUPS AND PLUG-INS.

AND SPACE BETWEEN EACH LETTER, HARDER THAN ENGLISH. :p

Google Translate总可以用吧，翻成中文后copy & paste

lwyy · 发表于 2009-9-4 09:46