dammy

每一次你要来这里
都到窗前偷偷看你
等待着人群中,
你慢慢走来的身影

每次你要离开这里
都到窗前偷偷看你
目送着人群中
你逐渐远去的身影

喜欢你走来的每一步
看微风亲昵你的发丝
怕你嘲笑我的痴心
只好在窗前偷偷看你

舍不得你远去的每一步
看轻风依恋你的衣襟
怕你心疼我的孤寂
只好在窗前偷偷看你

好想一辈子就这样看你
春夏秋冬你来去的身影
头发白了才告诉你
在窗前曾经偷偷看你

tweety

hehe, who is that lucky guy?  

hjl2001

看什么看，不好好学猫叫，还要来老鼠。

saturdayafterno

Hi dammy,

I like your poem. I have some experience somewhat as you. It happened between my roommate. There is a poem I wrote two months ago.

...............................................
I would like to hear your song, even if next to the door.
I would like to glimpse your back, even if reflected from the window.
I would like to remember your figure, even if ten days haven't meet you.
Am I crazy? Yes, I am fall in love with you.
...............................................

This is truly taken place on a lot of yesterday. But my friend move out now.
Story is over.  

May 2, 2002

baoan

who is the lucky and handsome Mickey? We are eager to know the details. Maybe there is a wedding between Cat and Mouse in Montreal, the thousands-year opponents become friends.The natural law turns wrong under Dammy's emotion. Great emotion.

dammy

怎么冒出个老鼠来了?

downtown

原来猫是这么捉老鼠的。

lzhou

冒出个老鼠有什么奇怪?

好好的一首诗,要不是因为作者滑稽可笑(是个狐狸精),大概读了此诗的人都会有这样的感觉:那个少女不怀春?遗憾啊,DAMMY.你该换个笔名了.你已经不是写"大地溪"的DAMMY了.我要不看作者,感觉还挺好.一看作者,就和大伙一样:想乐!DAMMY的芳心还不是朝秦暮楚:早上往东瞅,晚上又往西瞧.只有傻哥哥才会上当.         

dammy

拜托,LZHOU,我哪里得罪你啦,莫名其妙来了这么一大串.这是我几年前的旧作,今天无意中翻出来,POST 出来与大家共赏,不知道一顶顶"滑稽可笑""朝秦暮楚"的大帽子从何而出.我不喜欢在网上和人唇枪舌剑.既然有人不喜欢,老猫一死以谢天下.以后sinoquebec 的BBS上不再有DAMMY之人.各位就此别过.保重

joymane

dammy:
     写的蛮好的，他们为什么说你，我搞不懂。
     一个人的心境是不容易用几句话说清楚的，但你做到了。我觉得很好也很感动。