[作品展示] 【不断更新】初学者上图，高手们不要吝啬哇，多给点意见【不断更新】

020 · 发表于 2009-8-25 14:17

Nice!

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-25 15:54

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-25 15:57

iop · 发表于 2009-8-25 16:20

随便说两句: 总的来说不错! 只是个人觉得:

(1) #13 号的照片, 有点过嚗, 要是加个Black Glass Filter会好些;
http://www.bhphotovideo.com/c/se ... p;InitialSearch=yes

(2) #16号锐化过度;

lwyy · 发表于 2009-8-25 16:28

Post by iop;2343291
随便说两句: 总的来说不错! 只是个人觉得:

(1) #13 号的照片, 有点过嚗, 要是加个Black Glass Filter会好些;
http://www.bhphotovideo.com/c/se ... p;InitialSearch=yes

(2) #16号锐化过度;

经你这么一说觉得是过曝了，之前只注意了水流，没有考虑到整体效果，结果过曝了。

kkli · 发表于 2009-8-26 12:15

1 2 4 5 composition is not very comfortable for my eyes

Portraits, light is harsh and plain, no matter what flash you are using, you have to turn down at least one stop. Poses are awkward too, 6 7 you had focus problem. 9 is interesting, better than others.

street photos, don't know why you shot them. I don't prefer to see girls like someone up there. LOL

ballons: 15 are good, color and composition. 16, don't know why you cut the fish head, but like the color and find ok to sharpen like what you did, or my old monitor has problem.

kkli · 发表于 2009-8-26 13:24

can't type chinese at work. if you really want, i can translate myself tonight.