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Post by beauty999
Your comment shows your English is poor. My English writing got A in University writing test at Advance degree. And my friend who is American told me that my English was very good.:wink:

Don`t cheat reader as if every people don`t know English except you.:eek:

你的E文好否自己不能判断,而要拉出一块虎皮来佐证. 太搞笑了吧?

你上一段文字应该是精心准备的吧, 就连我这个4级英语都没过得也能看出不少错误.你这个大学高级班的A也太水了吧.哪个野鸡大学?

davidchak

Your comment shows your English is poor. My English writing got A in University writing test at Advance degree. And my friend who is American told me that my English was very good.;)

Don`t cheat reader as if every people don`t know English except you

应该是：

Your comment shows that you have poor command of English. I got an A in my University English writing test at Advance level. And my friend who is an American told me that I have good command of the language.

Dont think that everyone doesnt know English except you.

献丑了，我的英文也不是很好。不要生气嘛，有批评，才有进步！

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Post by davidchak
Your comment shows your English is poor. My English writing got A in University writing test at Advance degree. And my friend who is American told me that my English was very good.;)

Don`t cheat reader as if every people don`t know English except you

应该是：

Your comment shows that you have poor command of English. I got an A in my University English writing test at Advance level. And my friend who is an American told me that I have good command of the language.

Dont think that everyone doesnt know English except you.

献丑了，我的英文也不是很好。不要生气嘛，有批评，才有进步！

这不?人家在你原文基础上改一改就好多了.不仔细看就没多少错误了.

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Post by beauty999
First, I sincerelly thank you for you took time on reading my thread.

Second, I appreciate your attitude to research English writing.

However, I have to say that even though you found some wrong in my English writing, I could not agree with your all corrections.

For an expression way, either Chinese and English could have many sentences models, if you changed the phrase expressing way, you could not prove that I have grammar fault.
  
Sometime, I posted a thread too quickly and not carefully. I focus on the idea not the grammar. I hope others people could note this.

In the end, I have to say that this forum is not for people to show their English ability, but for people to exchange their mind, feeling and interest. Somethings are serious, but not all things. Which language I prefer to writing the thread is my freedom. Don`t show such a back soul and don`t black your view.
  
Regard,

It is your right to choose whatever language you prefer to write your threads, but at least you should respect the basic rules of writing an error-free sentence. Don't you think that what you posted here is simply kind of visual pollution?

Laozhu

Post by beauty999
Please excuse me to correct your gammar faults before I accept your suggestion.:wink:

The correct grammar knowledge:

Prefer to doing sth. not Prefer to do sth.

Think that... `that`` usually is omitted when that leads a object clauses. So the phrase should be:

Don`t you think what you posted......
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I don`t think my English is perfect but it is hard for my to accept your comment.

Don`t you think our Chinese should learn how to be kindness to our countrymen?
It is too many rough and attacked words in SINOQUEBEC forum, is our shame to endure such bahaviors happened. Even some people joined in them.

人家帮你改错,你不感谢反倒恶语相加就是你的不对了.

你指责别人写法有错就完全是鸡蛋里面挑骨头了.首先Prefer后面即可跟接不定式也可接动名词, 用Prefer to do sth一点都没错.况且这个动词Prefer的宾语根本不是to do而是名词Language, 所以,你的Correction完全是多此一举.

另外那个That也完全是标准的用法,只是现代语法学家认为这种情况下Ｔｈａｔ可以省略,但不是必须省略.事实上在Business English和Legal English 中,这个That 是不能省的，考过ＧＭＡＴ和ＬＳＡＴ的人都知道。

说句实话，你和帮你改错的人的Ｅ文水平不是一两个数量级的差别。还是虚心点，忠言逆耳利于行嘛。

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Post by beauty999
Please excuse me to correct your gammar faults before I accept your suggestion.:wink:

The correct grammar knowledge:

Prefer to doing sth. not Prefer to do sth. (hahaha!)

Think that... `that`` usually is omitted when that leads a object clauses. So the phrase should be:

Don`t you think what you posted......
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I don`t think my English is perfect but it is hard for my to accept your comment.

Don`t you think our Chinese should learn how to be kindness to our countrymen?
It is too many rough and attacked words in SINOQUEBEC forum, is our shame to endure such bahaviors happened. Even some people joined in them.

My gosh!What on earth are you attempting to express?Do you understand what you posted?

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Post by beauty999
不费言论，其意已明。
借孙子兵法，昭示深意。

泱泱中华十数亿人口，岂非无才能者耶。

当今之世，中华天才人物不乏其人。何时能出现一个天才的政治家，中国就更加富有希望了。

你看你看,你的中文表达有多好, 文言白话,掌控自如. 既如此,在一个全部是华人的论坛里,何必用一种你没有能力驾驭的文字呢?

你的English仅仅只达到能够按中文语序堆砌一些英文词汇(包括很多错误的词汇) 的程度,完全没有达到能自如表达自己意思的水准.不要用一个假象的A来自欺欺人,更不要用一个 American朋友的善意评价来掩饰.你的东西就摆在那里,这不比什么都有说服力吗?

如果这个论坛是英语学习板块,你尽可以用英文来和大家交流. 或者你暂时没有输入汉字的条件,我们也可以原谅你幼稚的英文.但如果你只是想秀秀你的English, 你的笑话就闹大了.

有来无往非君子，对于你为我那段垃圾英语所做的修改，我首先表示感谢，但我要说的是，你的刺挑错了。prefer 后面可以接to do, doing, that 从句，名词等，但唯独没有prefer to doing sth 这种用法. 在比较两个动作的时候可以用prefer doing sth to doing Sth else　这种句型。但这个句型与你说所的prefer to doing 完全是两码事。

但愿你good good study.day day up