flagger

美9的的创意不错,起码能给这里带来些许新鲜的氛围. 支持!

俺斗胆也把《再别康桥》的第一段翻一下，您看看如何？
轻轻的我走了，
正如我轻轻的来；
我轻轻的招手，
作别西天的云彩。

I leave is just like I come quietly
Waving my hand gently
Farewell the clouds to the west

i am nobody

Post by beauty999;2273752
Farewell Cambridge Again

Zhimo Xu  

(Translator  beauty999)

Quietly, I leave
As I come quietly
Quietly I am waving my hand
Farewell the western clouds.

The riverside`s green willow
Is the Sunset`s bride ,
The beauty`s shadow in beam wave,
Flowing in my heart.

The Green Nymphoides on the Ooze,
Floating on the bottom of river,
In the wave of Cambridge`s river,
I am reconciled to be an aquatic.

The pond in the shadow of the Elm,
Is not a spring,
Is the kneaded rainbow's fragments in the floating algae,
Precipitated a rainbow-like dream.

Seeking for the dream? Holding a long punt pole,
Paddling toward the more bottle-green aquatics,
In the full boat`s starlight,
Singing aloud in the star light.

But I can't sing aloud,
Silence is the departure`s rhythm
Even the summer hexapods keep silence for me,
Silence is the tonight Cambridge!

Quietly, I leave, as I come quietly;
I wave my sleeve
Without taking a piece of cloud.

徐志摩要是看到你翻译的诗会一头撞死在Cambridge

i am nobody

Post by beauty999;2272283
I can not accept your comment. Anyway, thanks to comment.



Even Lilac in western culture doesn't mean sadness or gloom, it also doesn't mean  I can not use this word to express its special meaning in Chinese poem.

I thanks Your opinion but I don't agree with you.

I don't want to argue with you.  Because I know people's comment can show his ability and taste.

I know my ability and talent, I know the quality of my translation, so I don't need your admit. Sorry;):cool:

这个自封的美人连基本的词法和语法都没搞清，就想翻译诗。人有多大胆，地有多大产啊。

capitalist

Post by i am nobody;2274357
徐志摩要是看到你翻译的诗会一头撞死在Cambridge

小徐会认为: translation server error

capitalist

Post by flagger;2273888
美9的的创意不错,起码能给这里带来些许新鲜的氛围. 支持!

flagger说的对.
坚决支持B9倡导的文化运动

capitalist

我也搞个翻译.

goodbye hello
by beatles

You say yes, I say no  
You say stop and I say go, go, go  
Oh, no  
You say goodbye and I say hello  
Hello, hello  

我爱香, 你喜欢臭,
我想胖, 你非要瘦,
我要和平你非得斗,
斗斗斗, 你有够没有够.